Wonderful poem, Laura! So many great images here. It was startling that you did not leap away from the jellyfish, but stepped into an alien world, in spite of the pain. Great work and congratulations! 🙂
Those last two lines! What a wonderful return to the (by then forgotten) title — suddenly felt like I was the one standing on a meaning being pulled out by the tide…
Wonderful poem, Laura! So many great images here. It was startling that you did not leap away from the jellyfish, but stepped into an alien world, in spite of the pain. Great work and congratulations! 🙂
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Thank you for reading, Robin, and for the kind words. Thank you for getting the heart of the poem!
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Those last two lines! What a wonderful return to the (by then forgotten) title — suddenly felt like I was the one standing on a meaning being pulled out by the tide…
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🙂 Much appreciated, Alice! Glad you enjoyed it — thank you for taking the time to read it.
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