Transmutation / by Laura M Kaminski
a response to Ihsan Jaffar’s “Love’s Shadow”
on a full moon night
stand out beneath the sky
in the late evening
stand barefoot as
the pauper that you are
and face the light
feel your body now becoming
a transparent figurine, like a glass
chess-set knight or king
let each beam
of reflected sunlight
bounce off the moon
and flow right through your clarity
without appropriation or delay
and when you turn
you’ll find those shadows
you were carrying inside
have piled up behind you
weightless now
–Laura M Kaminski, 2014
you got me at ‘barefoot’ and suckered me with the shadows; this works completely by itself, I didn’t read what it was a response to …
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I just hooked up to your blog, and look forward to exploring it.
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Laura, this poem is truly beautiful! To me, it eradiates a deeper sense of the mystery of being…
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Thank you so much for reading — I am so glad it spoke to you.
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It certainly does. 🙂
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